The Devil’s Bane #5

The Loya Homestead was made up of a series of barns and storage containers. They were a merchant family that supplied the region with vital amenities such as soap, silk, horseshoes, guns, bullets, and water-treatment solutions. The woman named Annette Loya had saved our lives and, as her men cleaned up the road leading to her home, she walked me through the buildings.

‘You are lucky. If I hadn’t been on morning watch, any one else would have simply closed our gates and waited for the smoke to clear,’ said Annette. Her black eyes didn’t seem to miss a detail and I for one am glad she had a backbone.

‘I apologize. I seem to have hit my head when the cart exploded. Are my wares…?’

‘Gone, it seems. The flames consumed them. Such a shame too. We could have used those rifles.’

I remembered what Dusty Rose had said about her father, Hector. I had to come up with a reason to meet with him. I couldn’t forget. I was alive because I had a condition to meet.

‘Where’s you father?’ I asked.

‘He’s under the weather in the main home. That’s why I’m here. Until he’s feeling better, I run the place.’

‘Ah,’ I said, clearing my throat.

‘Don’t worry, Otto. Though we’ve never met, I do hope our previous correspondence makes you feel at home,’ said Annette and for some strange reason, she blushed deep red. The color was so intense she turned her face away from me for a hurried moment. When she looked back, the color had returned to normal and she flashed a quick smile.

‘Well then, allow me to show you to your chambers.’

‘Ms. Loya,’ said one of her henchmen. ‘What do we do with him?’

I’d almost forgotten about Clyde and was stunned to see he was still alive. He sported a deep gash on his forehead that was crusted in blood flecs and mud. His left eye was inflamed shut and he could barely hold himself up if not for Annette’s men holding him up on his knees. His right eye was bolted right at me.

‘Who is this?’ asked Annette.

I hesitated. I couldn’t reveal that I knew it was Clyde. If I did, I would put myself in danger and kill us both. I heard the click of a revolver and turned to see Annette had brought her gun up to his head.

‘My man said he was driving the cart. Is he a friend of yours or an enemy?’

Then, I saw the look in Clyde’s face change. He smiled and gave a quick shake of the head. No one else noticed it but I did. It was a look of peace. A look like he was a part of something much greater that he was. Like he was ok taking a bite of a bullet.

‘Well?’ prodded Annette.

‘No. I do not know him,’ I said. ‘He tried to kill me.’

Without hesitation, Annette pulled the trigger and blew Clyde’s brains out the side of his head. He fell limp like a sack of potatoes.

I gasped to see the look of peace still etched on his face. Annette shoved her revolver into her holster and snapped her fingers at her men. ‘Get this trash out of here. Otto, if you will follow me, I have already prepared your room for your stay.

She brought her hand underneath my arm and guided me away. I looked back at Clyde’s body. Could I have said something to save his life? What did he think giving his life was so worth it?

-Dr. Marcus Listrum (Otto)

The Devil’s Bane #4

They hung the crazed old man at sunrise. I saw his broken shadow swinging from a rope from within the jail cells. Dusty Rose wasn’t playing around.

A hulk of a man opened the cell gate and walked in holding a bundle of clothes in his arms. He walked to the foot of my cot and dropped it there. I heard the rattle of something metallic within.

‘Clyde,’ grunted the man.

‘I’m Dr. Listrum?’ I said, standing up.

‘No. That man is dead. You are now Otto Montgomery. I have it on good authority that the Loya family have been waiting for a certain shipment of guns from the Englishman. How good is your accent?’

‘Let me guess, the real Otto Montgomery is dead.’

This ushered a hideous smile from the giant. ‘Quartered in a ditch, now that you mention it.’

I sifted through the bundle on my cot. Wrapped in a leather duster’s jacket was a belt lined with .22 brass bullets, a small leather pouch with a clump of more of the same loose ammo within, two dynamite sticks wrapped together, and a single monocular lens. Beside the lens was a Russian seven-shot officer revolver. A wide-brim hat topped the bundle off.

‘You know, this really isn’t my style,’ I said, bringing the revolver up to the light. ‘What am I to do with this?’

‘Well, you can’t kill anyone with words. I wouldn’t think dead to be anyone’s style, to be honest. It’s your choice though,’ said Clyde.

‘That’s what I keep hearing. I don’t think death to be much of a choice.’

Clyde shrugged.

Before long, I found myself riding a horse cart on a muddy trail in a musky swamp sitting beside three crates full of weapons and ammunition. Clyde, the mud-brain of a man, sat at the front holding a tight grip on the leash. I relished the mid-afternoon mist of the day. My hand wandered to the iron at my hip. I had no earthly idea how I was supposed to use this gun. Let alone attempting to kill Hector Loya. The thought loomed over me like a dark cloud drenched in tar.

Suddenly, the rustling of leaves to my left caught my attention. I looked there but saw nothing. I realized Clyde had heard the same sound and had his gaze in the same direction. He pulled a rifle from the rifle sheath on his right and cocked the lever back.

Just as I was about to speak, the swamp around us erupted in rapid bursts of gunfire. Wood chips shot into my face as bullets sizzled into the horse cart. I dove to the floor by the crates as Clyde shouted something and slapped the reigns. The startled horse charged forward along the muddy trail.

I saw six riders with smoking guns like shadows of the dead materialize from thin air behind us. They were closing in.

‘Shoot your gun!’ shouted Clyde but I was frozen in fear bolted to the floor of the cart. I couldn’t tear my eyes away from the devilish reavers gaining on us. I could almost feel their hellish breath suffocate me as their lead zipped overhead.

The cart lurched upward as the horse jumped over a pothole. The wheels exploded and I was thrown into the road. I saw Clyde fall as well just a few feet away. He sported a gash on his forehead from which blood dripped over his face.

The riders brought their horses to a halt over us reeking of death and evil. Then, a hail of bullets rained on them and they fell to the mud.

I was astonished as the visage of dread melted away like hot water on a pile of salt. Hot lead filled the air but this time it didn’t come from our pursuers. I realized we were laying just a few yards away from a barn with an elaborate L above the entryway.

I turned to see a line of a dozen gunmen standing there led by a woman in a white shirt and black dress. Her pale skin was accentuated by her piercing brown eyes and raven black hair. Her chin was beautifully carved as were her cheekbones. The look in her eyes said anything but naivety. She had experience with guns, that much was clear as she sported two smoking revolvers in her hand and a cruel frown.

Clyde must have passed out for his body lay still in the mud. The other riders behind us were certainly dead.

The woman stood over me and I stared up the barrel of two revolvers.

‘Who the hell are you?’ she asked accompanied by a Spanish accent. She must have been a member of the Loya family.

I raised both hands up. ‘Otto Montgomery?’

Her look softened and she let her guns down. ‘You’re late.’

-Dr. Marcus Listrum (Otto)

The Devil’s Bane #3

The light in the cell flicked on and when I laid eyes on Dusty Rose, I was stunned. From what I understood, she had been leader of the Hunters of the Rose for more than twenty years but she didn’t seem older than thirty, despite her long hair which was completely white. Her very movements into my jail cell exuded danger that I quickly understood why she was who she was. This was just from the way she walked. I hope I’m never on the wrong end of her guns.

Dusty’s shadow enveloped me but all she did was strike a match on the concrete wall and put the flame to a thin cigarette in her lips. Her eyes glistened red as she took a drag. She blew the smoke from her nostrils and this is what she said.

‘Who are you?’

I told her my name.

‘Did you do it?’

Pretty standard questioning to be honest.

‘No,’ I said.

‘Well then, I guess we should let you go, huh?’

If I could be more shocked, I would have passed out. The jail guards looked just as floored as me as they stared between the iron bars.

‘I must say, stranger,’ she continued. ‘You came at a pretty bad time. The Loya family have owned the eastern ridges of the town since its founding. They want me and mine gone.’

‘What does that have to do with me?’ I asked.

‘They knew how close I was to Mr. Oldbarrows. He was my supplier and close friend. Instead of starting a war with me, they killed him and pinned the murder on you. Fortunately for you, I’m not the idiot they think I am. In order for me to get rid of the Loyas once and for all, I need your help.’

Suddenly, two men with irons at their hips entered the cell and picked the crazed man in the corner. He began to scream and fight them but one of them, a mountain of a man, reared back and punched him in the stomach. This bled the fight out of him and he allowed them to pick him up meekly.

‘Wh-where are you taking me?’ he asked. They didn’t answer as they threw a brown sack over his head and dragged him out of sight.

‘Dr. Marcus Listrum is going to swing by the neck in a few hours once the sun has come up.’

I felt my stomach drop to my toes. ‘I thought you said I was free to go.’

Dusty Rose smiled. ‘I did. Dr. Marcus Listrum will hang and then, once the sun has gone down, you are going to sneak into the Loya farmstead and kill Hector Loya.’

‘What? I’m not an assassin. I came to Glen Rio only to bury my father. That’s the reason I spoke with Mr. Oldbarrows. I needed funeral arrangements.’

‘That’s tough,’ said Dusty as she walked out the jail and closed the cell behind her. ‘If you don’t help me. I’ll make sure you are buried beside your father. You have a choice now, Dr. Listrum. Don’t disappoint me.’

Why do I feel like I just leapt from the frying pan into the fire?

-Dr. Listrum

The Devil’s Bane #2

I’ve never been a religious man, but tonight I found myself praying harder than I ever had in my life. I was never comfortable with the concept of death. Now that it was looming over me like a dark and heavy shadow, I realized I was terrified.

The jail cell squealed open and the guards tossed a small man with torn clothes and a crazed look in his eyes. They slammed the door shut and the man crept into the corner just outside the light of the moon. I could see his beady eyes sparkle in the darkness as he eyed me. The stench of feces and unwash permeated the room making my eyes water.

I decided against speaking to him. The last thing I would want is to bite the dust from a crazy inmate pommeling me to death.

How unlucky am I? My father died two months ago and thus the reason for my visit. I just want to return north, that’s all. A man like me has no place among these crazies.

Suddenly, the jail cell door swung open and a woman stood in the doorway, her shadow cutting through the light behind her.

‘Dr. Listrum. Talk about wrong place at the wrong time. You’re a dead man walking, aren’t you?’

Dear God, save me. It was Dusty Rose.

-Dr. Marcus Listrum

The Devil’s Bane #1

I just saw a man die today and now I’m going to hang for it. I can barely believe my poor luck. His was name Mr. Oldbarrows who owns a pelt shop down by Castor River. He was talking to me about the morning weather when suddenly his face exploded. That’s what it looked like to me when his body went limp and fell like a sack of potatoes. I still taste the splatter of blood on my lips.

As it so happens, he and I were the only ones in the shop and at that moment. A young lady, perhaps one of the brothel girls from the Silver Bullet Saloon, screamed and told everyone that I had killed him. I’m writing this from the jail cells and they have hung a new rope from the gallows just for me.

I am new to Glen Rio having recently arrived from New York. They don’t know me and don’t trust me. No one believed me when I said I didn’t kill him. I don’t even own a gun as I detest violence, gore, and death. Nothing good ever comes from the devil’s weapons.

My only hope comes in the shape of a woman named Dusty Rose. There is no law around here but she is the leader of a nasty cabal of bounty hunters called the Hunters of the Rose. She is said to arrive by this time on the morrow. I hope she will see reason. I am no threat to anyone and perhaps she can save me from these backwater inbred savages.

– Dr. Marcus Listrum

Announcement: The Devil’s Bane!

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The Preacher’s Whore

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